Journal Entry
The appeal of the lawless elite
Kate Nepveu has a write up of her reactions to Sly Mongoose up at 50 Books POC where she wonders about the character Pepper being a part of the lawless elite.
I think Kate’s on to something. I struggle with action/adventure writing in that I both a) enjoy the genre in a big way but b) struggle with the manifest assumptions within much of the writing and filming of it. I also struggle with reading it as well for those reasons.
I mean, in many cases your basic action hero is someone so obsessed with revenge they’re able to hold onto it through all manner of time, events, setbacks, and who really are comfortable putting many more people at risk through collateral damage than were often put in danger.
Often your action hero is already a killer (the cool assassin [I just saw an ad for Bangkok Dangerous, why are assassins heros?] etc), so you have to build these large frameworks to *justify* what they’re doing: a nuclear bomb, the end of the world, the destruction of a city etc etc.
And yet, yet, there is also the appeal of someone free from modern rules and regulations. In Michael Douglas’s Falling Down, the semi-hero gets everyone I’ve seen watch the movie clapping when he pulls out a gun at a fictionalized burger joint when, 5 minutes before 11pm, they switch from breakfast to lunch and refuse to give him an egg sandwich. After he fires the gun off, the scared people at the burger joint timidly offer to get him breakfast even though they stopped serving.
Hooray! Viewers who’ve been unhappy about being in this same situation are let into a power fantasy about fixing things with violent force. For a moment, deep inside, you roleplay how nice it would be to just fucking pull a gun on that pimply faced annoying burger server who’s just complicating your life and then YOU COULD GET WHAT YOU WANTED!
Of course, it’s just a fantasy. Pulling a gun out because you can’t get a breakfast sandwich means you’re all wrong in the head, no matter how frustrating it is.
But fictionalizing it gets a response, which is why revenge fantasies work, and the lawless elite is such an attractive action hero concept. The cop tosses his badge and decides to just hunt down and kill the murderer. The Punisher is the ultimate lawless elite.
And of course, in real life, vigilantism fails. Because in fiction, the lawless elite is *always* right, so his ends justify his means. In real life the ends justify the means causes collateral damage, which often causes effects that undo the end. Occupying armies think that if they can kill enough bad guys the problem is solved. If anyone carrying X amount of pot gets put away the problem will go away. But in those instances, the simple act of eradication leaves corollary problems: more people fill into those vacuums left by eradication in many cases, in some cases, stronger forces. It’s not a simple if/then.
But in fiction it often is.
But then, smart readers know there’s a real world. And sometimes, this sneaking realizing that an action hero is somewhat of a psychopath sneaks in. So Kate is very right, and I do try to sneak in some thoughts about the nature of these kinds of heros into the work. But Pepper is a problematic hero, if you think about it. Just as Wolverine, The Punisher and so on are… a great deal of the fun on the artistic side is in playing with that realization. Which is why the death of Timas’s friend in the second chapter has consequences for Pepper throughout the book, and why Timas’s assumptions about Pepper’s friendship put him in mortal danger
Pepper has his own agendas.
But then, that’s the interesting part about writing a character like that, I think.
update: and this thread at Sartorias’s livejournal is also fascinating for its discussion of all the same.
Filed under the topic Journal on February 23rd 2009 at 4:07 pm. You can subscribe to the RSS feed for this entry to keep track of comments. You can also use to trackback.
Comment policy: this is Tobias' blog and space. Like a guest in his house, accord other guests and your host respect and polite discourse while feeling free to engage in debate or comment. Failure to do so results in comment ban or deletion.
8 Responses so far
Your host:
Tobias is a Caribbean-born SF/F novelist who lives in Ohio.
Contact me:
tobias@tobiasbuckell.com
AIM: tobiasbuckell
Latest Comments
Pablo Defendini on Dreads (24)
Wyman Cooke on SF Author Peter Watts beaten and imprisoned at border crossing (27)
Rachel Heslin on Moff’s Law (6)
Emmalyn on Daily slogging (9)
King Rat on Authors behaving crack-head-edly (6)
Popular this month
In the ER
Repeat
Introducing...
Caption contest: Pat Rothfuss in cat ears
Diversity in science fiction markets
RT @scalzi RT @upwithgravity: Spread the word for the Spider Robinson fundraiser? Only 2 days left: http://is.gd/5Dnh7 4 hrs ago
New target deadlines for books/projects mapped out, to-dos updated & glanced over. Old electronics sold. 15 hrs ago
Okay, office cleaned, software updated, desktop files cleaned, office paperwork cleared, books organized, inbox 0. Dishes, then bed... 15 hrs ago
Installing/updating iPhoto. Tried Picasa, but it wasn't really my cup of tea. iPhone integration not as snazzy. I'm getting stuck in my ways 16 hrs ago
What to do with my old electronics after upgrade? Hmm, gazelle.com to the rescue! 17 hrs ago
Currently Reading & Enjoying:

Free Fiction
Novels
Read the first 1/3 free of:
-Crystal Rain: First 1/3 [RTF]
-Ragamuffin-First 1/3 [RTF]
-Sly Mongoose-First 1/3 [RTF]
Short Stories
Toy Planes
The Fish Merchant [pdf]
Her
The Shackles of Freedom (with Mike Resnick)
Necahual
Four Eyes
Aerophilia
Shoah Sry (with Ilsa J. Bick [pdf]
Audio


1. Josh Kidd on Feb 23rd, 2009 at 5:53 pm
For me, I think the appeal of the “lawless elite” has less to do with an anger at the world’s stupid rules (as with Michael Douglas in falling down) and more to do with the belief that very often our governing structures can be corrupt and the appropriate moral choice is to break the law.
You might say, for example, that George Washington was a lawless elite. You could even say that men like Gandhi and Martin Luther King, Jr. were lawless elites even though they used nonviolent tactics.
2. Tobias Buckell on Feb 23rd, 2009 at 5:56 pm
Yeah, but action heros never try to gain justice by going on hunger strikes or peaceful organization…
3. Angie on Feb 23rd, 2009 at 6:10 pm
Have you seen Taken, Liam Neeson’s new movie? He’s a retired special-ops type whose daughter has been taken by sex slavers and he tears through Paris looking for her. He goes through bad guys by the truckload, beating up or shooting people in his quest for information about his kid, and I was cheering up until about halfway through the movie when he shot a guy’s completely innocent wife just to get the guy to cooperate with him. So far as he was concerned, the fact that it was “only a flesh wound” made it okay. o_O
It absolutely worked from the POV of showing his intensity of purpose, that he’s a father whose young daughter is in considerable danger and he’s willing to do anything to rescue her. But still, when he shot that woman without even thinking twice, that distanced me from him. I could still hope he found his daughter, but he was no longer someone I’d necessarily want to have as a next-door neighbor, you know? Hopefully the filmmakers meant me to feel that way.
But whether it was deliberate or not, it definitely made me think about this genre, and this kind of hero, and where the boundaries are.
Angie
4. Kate Nepveu on Feb 23rd, 2009 at 6:34 pm
Well, there are some rare pacifist action heroes, but they are still _action_ heroes . . .
What I tend to like about action hero-y stuff is the fun of compentence and improvisational intelligence, which I can also get from capers and whatnot, where it’s often less ethically problematic.
As for _Sly Mongoose_, the last scene was particularly what I was thinking of, fwiw.
5. David J. Williams on Feb 23rd, 2009 at 8:15 pm
It’s a really interesting issue, and I think it goes well beyond the vigilante framework: at its essence, this is really about characters functioning as (fantasy) vehicles for the unrestrained id. TERMINATOR is particularly interesting here; Arnold was playing a killer robot, yet Cameron very cagily set it up so that he ends up being the “hero”–certainly he upstages everyone else (and for pure “id-ness” that’s utterly devoid of moral context, it’s hard to top the police station massacre). And obviously Cameron has talked extensively about the covert audience identification with the Terminator, calling him the “ultimate rude person” (which I suppose is one way of putting it).
6. Ben S. on Feb 24th, 2009 at 12:18 pm
Interesting point on TERMINATOR.
I have always been a fan of stories which were split down the middle in terms of following the villian and following the hero. I’m wondering now if that’s because it provides a story structure which allows the hero to act in a manner which is more pro-social than those of “lawless elites” while still providing the villain’s angle for the rush of the id-ish power fantasy of simply using violence to solve problems.
7. Julia on Feb 24th, 2009 at 10:15 pm
Wow, I’m so glad you expanded on this topic–I was thrilled to see Kate taking it on in the 50books_poc LJ (I’m icecreamempress at LJ, and posted on that thread), and delighted that you engaged with it further, and in such an insightful way.
Delighted, but not surprised, because it is so clear from the book that you’ve done lots of thinking about this stuff, even while you’re writing squealing page-turning action scenes. And I have to say that the action in Sly Mongoose is some of the best space-adventure I’ve ever read.
8. Steve Buchheit on Mar 1st, 2009 at 3:18 pm
Sorry I’m late to the conversation, but I was actually just talking about this last night, but from a different direction. There were several stories I had read where I fully expected a character (protag or secondary) to be violent and they went a non-violent or softer direction (when the violence would 1, fit the character and 2, fit the situation). When this happened I was thrown out of the story. And then typically the non-violence was followed by extreme violence off screen (by the same character). This also tracks to my tendency to yell at TV shows that betray characters tendencies when they would be too violent (ie. why didn’t Picard vent Data to space after the third time he high-jacked the Enterprise I’ll never understand, or in “Chuck” how the good guys have the drop on the bad guys but fail to shoot so they can do the girl-fight scenes, or why Lucas had to have Greedo shoot first in the updated Cantina Scene). I think it’s the author’s reluctance to “be a bad person.” If the major violence happens off-screen they aren’t responsible for it. However, when you create a character/society/situation where violence is required (which happens in a lot of TV and movies) and then you mute that response I think you betray what you’ve previously written.
I think the appeal of the “lawless elite” all revolves around “fantasy violence” (like “cartoon violence”) even if it’s in real life. The viewers/readers have no stake in the issue (ie, they’re neither the victim or the perpetrator), but feel they can live vicariously through the action (mirror neurons) and they don’t have to live with the consequences (both the actual psychology of the kill, the physicality of the body/uncanny valley, and the resulting fall out of the action).